“It's like in the great stories, Mr. Frodo. The ones that really mattered. Full of darkness and danger they were. And sometimes you didn't want to know the end… because how could the end be happy? How could the world go back to the way it was when so much bad had happened? But in the end, it’s only a passing thing… this shadow. Even darkness must pass.”
- JRR Tolkien

Wednesday, 2 March 2016

Target Audience Feedback of First Draft

I've recently been given feedback for my media trailer, and I completely agreed with everything that was said:

To get rid of any clips with 'fangs' (especially since so many people thought it was a Vampire film trailer!)
To change the song in the background, since it does get a bit grating (I'm thinking of changing it to a more electronica/synthesiser sound to reflect the digital themes)
To rearrange footage to show it as a revenge story/make plotline clearer
To include the idents and captions.

And finally to cut out that f-word.

I completely and utterly agree with the criticisms mentioned and will be sure to act on them!

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